Open your eyes...Wake up!
A knife in your hands. Blood, all around you.
It must be a dream. Wake up!
Your favourite teacher of the CES laying next to you, dead.
Why? Why did you do that? WAKE UP!
Now you feel good, the claps of your mates, your family...
The best scene you have ever done. Thank you teacher.
Good use of the chunk technique. You apparently have changed a tragic scene in something funny. You have talent.
ReplyDeleteWell done. You have create a theatre play in just a few words. Strong imagery and powerful beginning and ending.
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